Thursday, May 24, 2012

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It sounds as if you have been or perhaps someone you know is or was a drug addict. But nonetheless a perfect work of art.

I hold my love.
It fills my heart pumping,
through my veins, and my
heart beat accelerates,
my fear decreases. I feel
whole, because it is inside me.
I hold my addiction. It is
My Love. And I keep it
close to me. I hold
My Love.

I feel as if this poem is not completely finished. Like there is something left unsaid that still needs to be said. Though, it does have a flow to it that I rather like.

What is the addiction? Or is that for the reader to find out within themselves? It leaves me with a lot of questions but not in a bad way. Kind of dark though.

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